This was the feedback given from a fellow media student given after watching evasion with a critical eye
at 0:46 when Josh throws the phone, he stands there for too long, this should be cut
works well, not confusing...not feeling the random sirens though! soundtrack is brilliant, however the random drums added should be left out...editings good apart from 2:04 - 2:05 the jump isn't great but this is all minor. overall really good! soundtrack can be repetitive and a bit quiet sometimes though.
This has all been taken into account and will be asssessed during the editing session available
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