Editing

After looking ove the feedback given on Evasion on youtube a view slight edits need to be made to the soundtrack and timmings of Evasion. I will be using final cut to rectify these certain mistakes and improve  The final product.

feedback

This was the feedback given from a fellow media student given after watching evasion with a critical eye

at 0:46 when Josh throws the phone, he stands there for too long, this should be cut

works well, not confusing...not feeling the random sirens though! soundtrack is brilliant, however the random drums added should be left out...editings good apart from 2:04 - 2:05 the jump isn't great but this is all minor. overall really good! soundtrack can be repetitive and a bit quiet sometimes though.

This has all been taken into account and will be asssessed during the editing session available

filming

On set today as our group intends to rectify certain errors made during initial filming spotted in editing. We are going include an establishing during the beginning of the scene before the chase so there is a stronger element of setting the scene. There will also be a wider a variety of shots used that we forgot to use during initial filming such as more close ups panning shots and more angles instead of using simple long shots for most of the sequence.